Помогите пожалуйста! Я написала диалоги, но в английском я профан. Исправьте, пожалуйста, грамматические ошибки и, может, дополнить чем-нибудь можете. Помогите сделать диалоги более "живыми".

1) Problems with tenage children:
- Hi, Monika
- Hi, Clara
- I have a problem!
- What happiened?
- I think i feel in love with Jack.
- Where is the problem?
- He's so handsome and smart. He doesen't attention to me.
- Don't be silly. I saw how he lokked at you. I think he like you.
- O realy? Great, thank you!
- I's my pleasure

2) A wedding
- Kaley, you remember our parents anniversary is coming us soon?
- Let's think about what to get them.
- I have some Ideas. I  remember that mum wanted to take a holiday. But we don't have a lot money.
- I think it would be a good dea to buy two tichets for a theater. That not very expensive, but interesting. I think they'll have a nice time.
- Good idea!

3) A visit to the dentist
- Hi, doctor Phil.
- Hello, mr Freema. What wrong?
- I have a severe toothache.
- Ok. Sit down and open you' mounth.
- Do you think it's seriosly?
- Nope, but you have visit to me after a week.
- Thank's, doctor.

1) Problems with teenagers:-Hi, Monika-Hi, Clara-I have a problem!-What happened?- I think I fell in love with Jack.-What is the problem?-He's so handsome and smart. He doesn't pay attention to me.-Don't be silly. I saw how he looked at you. I think he likes you.-Oh, really? Great, thank you!-You are welcome/2)A wedding-Kaley, do you remember our parent`s anniversary is coming soon?-Let's think what we shall give them-I have some ideas. I remember that my Mum wanted to celebrate their feast. But we don't have a lot of money.-I think it will be a good idea to buy two theater tickets. Thay are not very expensive, but it will be very interesting for our parents. I think they'll have a nice time.-What a good idea!3) A visit to the dentist- Hi, doctor Lobanov.- Hello, Mrs Freema. What is wrong?- I have a severe toothache.- Ok. Sit down and open your mounth.- Do you think it is serious?- No, but you will have to come to me next week.-Thank you, doctor.Если ты захочешь, можешь в некоторых случаях вспомогательный глагол соединить.