Пожалуйста, будьте добры, проверьте, правильно ли я составил сочинение по английскому языку.How I spent my summer holidays


Summer
- the holidays. My favourite season is summer. I love them
very much awaited. However, I spent them badly. This summer was
not remembered. All summer I stayed home. A couple of trips I went to the
village. But there I didn’t
like. There was no creature comforts. In the city I watched TV, read books. Sometimes, I played computer games
and walked. In the street I played football. Sometimes, my friends and I went to
the cinema. In the summer I read books which the teacher asked to read for
the summer. I read almost everything. Some of books were very large, but
some of them I liked. At the end of the summer, I really wanted to
go somewhere, but it didn't happen. Hopefully next summer I spend more
better.

Можете взять текст выше, он довольно неплох

Спасибо, ой даже не знаю, что выбрать. Но что вам нужно?

Спасибо

Мне ничего. Берите литературный текст из второго ответа.Он сложен литературным языком.

Так будет лучше.А я просто исправила в вашем тексте ошибки.

Да, пожалуй, нет. Учитель все таки знает, что я не очень. Да и учительница у нас новая. Так что я возьму исправленный вами текст. Спасибо

Вам тоже большое спасибо.

 My favourite season is summer. I love it very much. However, I spent it badly. This summer was not memorable. All summer I stayed at home. Half of free time  I spent in thevillage. But I didn’t like to be there . There was no creature comforts. In the city I watched TV, read books. Sometimes, I played computer gamesand went for a walk. In the street I played football. Sometimes, my friends and I went tothe cinema. In the summer I read books which the teacher asked to read forthe summer. I read almost everything. Some of the books were very large, butsome of them I liked. At the end of the summer, I really wanted togo somewhere, but it didn't happen. Hopefully next summer I will spend better.

My favorite season is summer. Each year I wait for next summer. But unfortunately this summer wasn't as good as I expected. All days long I stayed at home. I was in the village a couple of times but I didn't enjoy it.There was no creature comforts. In the city I watched TV and  read books. Time by time, I played computer games and went out for a walk.In the street I played football.  my friends and I went tothe cinema a couple of times. In the summer I read books which the teacher asked us to read duringthe summer. I read almost everything. A lot of books were very large, but anyway  I loved some of them . At the end of the summer, I really wanted togo somewhere, but it didn't happen. Hopefully next summer will bebetter.