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at 11 o'clock, the 11th day, 11 months in 1918 ended the First World voyna.every year people are UK paper poppy as a symbol of the day pamyati.Pominalnye services are held across the UK there is the royal family and a host of vetiranov who laid flowers at the monument. musicians play traditional music, then the music dies down and there comes a moment of silence.

At 11 o'clock, the 11th november, in 1918 ended the First World War.Every year people from the UK wear paper poppy as a symbol of the day of memory.Memorial services are held over the UK, where comes royal family and veterans. They lay flowers at the monument. Musicians play traditional music, after rhis music dies down and comes a moment of silence.