помогите пожалуйстаа нужно сочинение по английскому на тему my impression about new york.(мои первые впечатления о Нью Йорке) примерно 10 предложений

I love New York. But I do not like movies where the city suffers. In New York there is a large statue of liberty, it is very beautiful. Very large and tall buildings - skyscrapers. Very beautiful Times Square. All sorts of comic book superheroes live in this city. I would like to live in this city.

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When i saw New Yourk for the first time I was really excited. A lot of bright and huge buildings, skyscrapers. There were a lot of shops and big shopping malls. I thought:"i want to visit them all". This city is very different from mine. There are a lot of interesting landmarks. My favourite is the Statue of Lyberty. There are also a lot of beautiful parks. And people are very friendly and kind there. I really liked this city, and I wanna visit it again...

В первом, если что, много ошибок... В построении в предложений, в основном.