you promised me these books long ago

1)these books were promised to me by you long ago

2) i was promised these books by you long ago

 

Bessie's father gave her a complete set of Walter Scott's works

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a complete set of Walter Scott's works was given by her Bessie's father

2) She was given a complete set of Walter Scott's works by her Bessie's father

 

есть ошибки?

 

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