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Dear Ann,

Thank you for letter in 3may.

I am really sorry I haven*t written back,I wasn*t at home.I was in London and visited my son.I was very happy.

What do you do in your free time?Write me about you and your family.

I have a big family.There are 6us:my mum,my dad, my husband, my daughter and my son.

We live in Odessa.

I*m waiting for your letter again.

love,

Maryna

Dear Tony,

Thanx for your letter, man! So, how is it going? Did u pass your exams ?I am good too. My mom bought me new nintendo DS3! It's soooo cool,dude! You should come and check it out!Holidays are comin' ,aren't they? So, how about going to the cinema or to the Christmas fair? We could watch "The Avengers". Do you like them?Actually,what are your plans for holidays ? Will you visit any country or gonna stay at home?Oh,God. Sorry, my mom wants me to help her right now! I should go.Write back soon!Best wishes,

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