Проверьте текст по английскому . Особенно грамматику (времена).
It was a magic day at school. Happy children were running around the school. Dasha and me had went to house before lessens ended.
When we were coming at home, Dasha and me saw that our TV itself included. I was calling my mother while Dasha turned off the TV, but he not turned off. We thought it would made a gosts.
My mom had been riding in home 2 hours so she was tired. My mother sanded that it's not hosts.We have very oldest TV, and he very bad work.
Dasha and me were laughing all day because it was very funny.
Пожаааалуйста,проверьте. Срочно надо. 8-й класс.

еще больше ошибок, исправляй по образцу первый текст, удачи

нормальный же текст был, ошибки исправил, дерзай, зачем новый писать?

удачи, я удаляюсь отсюда

Спасибо большое)

Ничего, если проблемы с английским - добавляй в друзья, я помогу

LessOns have ended. When we were coming home (без предлога). Dasha and me в 4-ом предложении заменить на we. Телевизор не может быть"he", пиши "it" it didn't turn off. We thougt it because of the ghosts. My mom had been going home for 2 hours and she was really tired. She said that TV turned off because it is very old and it works bad. Снова заменить на we