Исправленный вариант:Hi Henry! How are you? My name is Chris and I\'m ten years old. I go to the Green School. My favourite subject is PE. I also like History and English. Every day I have a lunch break from 12:30 to 1:30. Friday is my favourite day at school. I have History, English and PE on this day. Well, that\'s about it. Please write soon and tell me about your school. Bye for nowОшибки:1. I go to the Green School - нужно использовать артикль The. I go to School используется при общем употреблении, когда имеется ввиду какая-то определенная школа, тогда добавляется артикль.2. Every day I have a lunch break from 12:30 to 1:30 - Порядок слов! Сначала Every day....3. Friday is my favourite day at school - порядок слов, лучше в таком порядке.