Ребятки,знатоки английского,проверьте на правильность текстик... A year, for many different occasions, each has its own

There are many different holidays in a year, each of them has its own customs and traditions. I like the 8-th of March because everybody prepares interesting crafts for our mothers. On the 9 th of May all my family goes to the parade. On Easter my mother paints eggs and we go to visit my grandmother who prepares delicious cakes and other treats. But most of all I like my birthday! On my birthday I am paid much attention and given many gifts. You can invite a lot of friends and play all day long. On my birthday my mother bakes a cake for me, I blow up the candles on the cake and make а wish. If do not to tell anyone about your wish, the wish will come true. That\'s why the birthday for each person is a magical day!