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Hunting learn to singAnd be a master of the dance,To be able to draw beautifully,And to achieve anything in life.But the dream as a dream the past,The other for a moment you\'ve become,And the smallest slightest,You told the wonder of the world.Her beautiful eyes,Seeing the world turned upside down, And soon I realized then,Love is a hard war.