Эссе по английскому "Should teenagers work part-time to earn money?". Желательно по структуре: 1. введение 2. аргумент

Theme of working and earning money was always popular between teenagers. Here comes the question: should teenagers work part-time to earn money?

Well, why not? It is beneficial for teenagers to feel themselves independent. They start to think how money are made. Also it helps teenagers to learn how to plan their budget to buy staff they like.

On the other hand, youngsters should study. Even if they are working part-time, it shifts their focus to another things which is absolutely unhelpful for their future.

To summarize all above mentioned, it depends on what person want from life. But, however, everyone needs money.