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Together with his desire to have an adventure, he equally wants to enter the university.

I will not go unless the weather is fine.

He got absolutely wet even though he was wearing waterproof shoes.

On the other hand, it is your area of responsibility and I really cannot tell you what to do.

Meanwhile, I will give you a prescription for some pills.