М.Горький "В люди"

Нужен отзыв о произведении (ОЧЕНЬ краткий пересказ или основная мысль) (небольшой)

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My city is Yaroslavl.In Yaroslavl in winter weather is very cold,about of minus 20-25C.Winter goes by a lot of snow.Winter is windy and dry and cloudy.In spring is very wet and slush.All nature wakes up.Summer is warm,sumetimes dry,sometimes rainy.The normal temperature in Autumn is plus 15C-minus 5C.In Autumn very wet and humid,because every day cloudy and rainy.But i still love my city-Yaroslavl!