Помогите, пожалуйста! Есть ли ошибки в монологе?
-Hi! What is your weather today?
-Hi! I have changeable weather! This morning was the rain, the sun is now in heaven.
-I Too hot and stuffy.
-What is your favourite season of year?
- Spring! Flowers bloom, the sun is shining on the street! What is your favorite season?
- Autumn. Yellow leaves are very beautiful.
- I love autumn.
- I can gather mushrooms and collect a herbarium.
-I am going home! Till!
- Till!

Спасибо большое!

- Hi! What is your weather like today? - Hi! We have changeable weather! This morning it was raining, the sun is now shining in the sky. - It is hot and stuffy here, too. - What is your favourite season of the year? - Spring! Flowers are blooming, the sun is shining! What is your favorite season? - Autumn. Yellow leaves are very beautiful. - I love autumn. - I can gather mushrooms and collect a herbarium. - I am going home! See you! - Bye!