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Hello, Irina, will you be in my party?
Hello, after which the party?
In honor of my birthday.
Oh, my God, I forgot, sorry, I’ll be of course! And who is invited else?
Lily, Alina, Anna – you know them, and some cheerful guys!
О, it‘ll be cool! What to bring with me?
Yes, please, take some bottles of Cola and a few snacks.
Ok, what I can, so I bring. When I can come?
The start begins by seven o’clock. I'll be waiting.
ОК.

Hello, Irina. Are you will come to my party?Why would you choose to have a partyIn honor of my birthday. Oh, my God, I forgot, sorry, I’ll be of course! And who is invited else? Lily, Alina and Anna – you know them, and some cheerful girls! О, it‘ll be cool! What to bring with me? Yes, please take some bottles of Cola and a few snacks. Ok, what I can, so I bring. When I can come? The start begins by seven o’clock. I'll be waiting. ОК.

Hello, Irina, will you come to my party? Hello, What party? my birthday party. Oh, my God, I have forgotten, sorry. of course I’ll come ! And who is invited else? Lily, Alina, Anna – you know them, and several cute guys! О, it‘s cool! What should I bring with me? Please, take some Cola and a few snacks. Ok, I'll bring, what I can. What time should I come? The party will begin at seven o’clock. I'll be waiting.