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I'm really looking forward to the new year. It is the most magical holiday I know. I am going to the shop . There are a lot of beautiful Christmas-tree igrushek.Krasnye, pink, green, black, yellow. I buy five boxes of Christmas decorations, go home The house I dress up the Christmas tree. Tinsel, rain, balls - all this in the New Year tree. And suddenly I see that the Christmas star razbita.I again go to the store. There's a large selection of stars to ёlku.Neskolko minutes I vyberaem eё.I here I see a big, beautiful, yellow star! It glitters, sparkles. I buy it, carry home. At home, I wore a star on the tree. Elka turned out beautiful! Then I went for a walk in the snow park, mom went with me and we brat.Tam Jr. many times fotografiruemsya.Eta best picture! There I was under the tree, sit and enjoy the upcoming new year godu.Novy - the best holiday, but the preparation for this festival as prikrasno! 50 БАЛЛОВ

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