Правильно скажу ли я написав так:
this story about acquaintance mom and dad. When dad was 14 years old he began to escort mom to the home

Спасибо. А как написать: год спустя папу призвали служить в армии

One year later my dad obtained a writ to serve as an official in the army.

This story is about my mum`s and dad`s acquaintance. When dad was 14 (можно без years old)he began to escort mum to home.