THERE ARE 12 MISTAKES IN LAURA S ESSAY.CORRECT THEM.
Most Egyptian children went to school when he were eight.There were sports for boys only , which was not much funny for girls.Egyptians liked a music and most childrens learned to play a instrument.
Egyptian houses didn t has as many furniture as our houses.The furniture was ussually made of wood, but rich peoples decorate their furniture with gold and ivory.Egyptians got a milk and meat from goats and they eat a lot of fish.They sweetened his food with honey.

Most Egyptian children went to school when they were eight. There were sports for boys only, which was not much fun for girls. Egyptians liked music and most children learnt to play an instrument. Egyptian houses didn't have as much furniture as our houses. The furniture was usually made of wood, but rich people decorated their furniture with gold and ivory. Egyptians got milk and meat from goats and they ate a lot of fish. They sweetened their food with honey.