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The most important "first time" for me was when I learned how to drive a motorbike. It was very important for me because all my friends were using and i couldn't. My friend were laughing at me because i had some problems with launching the vehicle so i was nervous and when i finally did i it I didnt know what to do and it turned off. My friend showed me once again how o do it and after few minutes i already knew how to launch a motor. The next steps in my driving lessons were easy so learned very fast almost everything. Finnaly my friend said that i should try o drive on my own I was scared but i said "ok". I launched my vehikle once again and I just started to driving I was shocked but i felt realy great. He was trying to run after me but i was driving too fast and when I relased im so far i turned back and drived back to him. after everythiing i was very proud and i wanted to do this again but it was late so he game me a lift to home. That day was awsome.

The most important "first time" for me was when I learned how to drive a motorbike. It was very important for me because all my friends were using it and I couldn't. My friends were laughing at me because I had some problems with starting  the engine  of the vehicle so I was nervous and when I finally did it I didn't know what to do and it turned off. My friend showed me once again how  to  do it and after a  few minutes I already knew how to start the engine. The next steps in my driving lessons were easy so I learned very fast almost everything. Finnaly my friend said that i should try to drive on my own. I was scared but I said "ok". I started the engine once again and I just started to drive I was shocked but i felt realy great. He was trying to run after me but I was driving too fast and when I realised I was so far I turned back and drove back to him. After that  I was very proud and I wanted to do that again but it was late so he gave me a lift to home. That day was awsome.