Написать сочинение памятный день моей жизни на английском языке. В прошедшем времени Past Simple

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Recently, my grandmother had a birthday, she turned 70 years old. It was a very important thing for me, because I really love my grandmother and wish her the best! On that day I immediately called her in the morning to say how much I love her and congratulate her on her birthday! I made her a great a postcard that I made not long before her day! I put on a beautiful black striped dress, made a high tail and went! We left that day at the restaurant, it was very tasty and there was a fabulous view from the window! During the holiday there were many of our relatives, who happily congratulated the beloved grandmother mob! I liked that day and I am happy it vspomninayu!

Получилось что то такое,так как переводчиком я не пользовалась,поэтому, пожалуйста, исправь что не так)0)