Радиус R малой планеты равен 250 км, средняя плотность *=3 г/см3. Определить ускорение свободного падения g на поверхности планеты.

ребятки, нужно, чтобы кто-нибудь проверил моё эссе! очень нужна хорошая оценка. прошу, кто что увидит, исправьте ошибки Т_Т в основном у меня бывает много грамматических

тема эссе: some people say that men withstand age better then women and remain attractive longer.

собственно моё эссе: How attractive a person is goes beyond physical qualities. A lot of factors contribute to how attractive someone is: health, wealth, food, willpower, society, personality and so on. Some people assert, that men withstand age better and remain attractive longer. But is it right statement?

On the one hand women age faster, becouse today they spend more time at work, so they don't have enough time for themselves. Moreover, women more emotional, than man. It certainly makes them unattractive. Therefore,a lot of makeup have bad effect on appearance.

On the other hand, among men there are a lot of smokers and drinkers. As far as I know, bad habits affect on the health and appearance. Futhermore, women, when they are under stress, they ask for help friends or someone from family. This is better way of coping with stress. However, man keep everything in themselves. As a result, appears old, unhealthy appearance. Moreover, there genes played important role.

In my opinion, I agree with this statment. Really, women more emotional and sensetive, then man. Usually man have more willpower and stamina in our crazy world. It help them withstand age better and remain attracrive longer. So, talking all these factors into account, my conclusion is that women get old really quickly, than man. But women live longer.

Say what medical problems you might have,...

Exampl: If I run fast, I might get a backache.

-if you eat too fast?

-if you eat a lot of sweets and chocolate?

-if you don't eat fruit and vegetables?

-if you get wet (промокли) on a cold day?

-if your neighbours make much noise?

-if you play football / badminton?

-if you fall dows?

в треугольнике ABC биссектрисы внешних углов при вершинах A и B пересекаются в точке D. найдите угол BDA, если ВСА равен 32 градуса

В результате взаимодействия 10,4 г тривалентного метала с хлором вышло 31,7 г соли. Какой это метал? (с решением)